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A Disqualified Family 

I always knew my family hated me. But when

lost my baby sister at twelve, they banished 

me to a foreign country

After four years of scraping by in the slums,

was finally dying

I called my brother, begging for money to buy 

painkillers, only to find out I had been 

blocked

Reborn on the day my sister disappeared,

don’t hesitate to run away from this twisted 

family

Except this time, the people who never saw 

me before have lost their minds

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it happened again. I’m back, reliving the day 

Lily vanished

Last time, she told me she needed to pee and 

to wait for her

I waited. And waited. Hours went by, and

was crying my eyes out, frantically searching

I didn’t know she was right there, watching 

me panic and laughing her little head off

When Mom and Dad found out I lost her

Mom didn’t hesitate. She slapped me so hard

my ears rang. Her eyes were full of hate

You can’t even watch your own sister? What 

good are you? You’re just extra baggage!” 

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I was stunned, but Mom’s words cut deep

Extra baggagereally hit home

The Jones family has three kids. My older 

brother, Carter, is responsible and the heir to 

the family fortune. Lily is a spoiled brat and 

the apple of Mom and Dad’s eye

And then there’s me, Rain Jones, the invisible 

girl

Mom and Dad hated that I was quiet and 

didn’t fawn over them like Lily. They hated 

that I wasn’t as pretty

My grades sucked too, not like my genius 

brother. I was worthless

Carter used to throw me in the basement as 

punishment every time I messed up

Claustrophobic, I would beat on the door, my 

nails ripping

The door had layers of blood and scratches

souvenirs from Rain Jonesfive to twelve 

years old

Carter said I was just being dramatic about 

the dark. He claimed I’d get used to it

I passed out in the basement that day. Later

Lily walked in like nothing had happened

She burst into tears and ran to Mom and Dad

claiming, Rain said she’d buy me cotton 

candy, and then she disappeared!” 

I was so scared! I thought I’d never see you 

again!” 

Mom held her precious, longlost darling

sobbing. When she heard what Lily said, her 

eyes turned to me with pure hatred

Why did I even give birth to that evil little 

bitch? I should have strangled her at birth!” 

They dragged me out of the basement, and 

all I saw were the cold, emotionless faces of 

my family

Lily, just ten years old, gave me a smug little 

smile before dropping the bomb that would 

ruin my life

Mommy, Daddy, I don’t want to see Rain 

anymore. I’m scared she’ll abandon me 

again.” 

And just like that, Mom and Dad exiled me 

overseas. They wanted me to never find my 

way back home

They said I owed it to Lily, that I needed to 

feel the same fear and helplessness she felt

Their only mercy was sending a nanny with 

me, along with some money

But they didn’t know that the nanny would 

abuse me the entire time

As soon as we landed in America, she stole 

all the money and ran, leaving me alone in the 

slums

I spent four years in hell, calling them over 

and over, but they always hung up

Eventually, at sixteen, ravaged by hardship,

was dying of terminal cancer

I had no money for treatment, no money for 

pain meds

The pain was excruciating. I spent my days 

coughing up blood, chunks of my insides

I called my brother, begging for money for 

painkillers

I wasn’t even asking to come home anymore.

just wanted some relief

But I was already blocked

I died in a foreign land on a snowy night

consumed by pain and resentment

This time, I won’t crave their love

I will run. I won’t let Lily Jones ruin my life

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